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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popular in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest

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For the past two to three decades, it has been seen that most of the population is facing problems being overweight and having health issues. It is observed that with the rise in the number of gyms in society, people tend to gain a lazy lifestyle. In
this
 essay, I will explore the reasons behind
this
 and purpose solutions. One of the main problems is that youngsters prefer to do white-collar jobs than blue-collar jobs in which they have less movement causing them to be lazy in their daily life.
In other words
, people who spend more time in an office on a chair in their daily routine become desk-bound. It is one of the major reasons behind their mental and physical health damage. Office management can overcome
this
 problem by subsidizing them with free gym passes or sessions. That will increase productivity as well as the firm reputation. Another issue
that is
 raising head caused by sedentary life, is unemployment. In the past century, humans are developing lots of reports and machines that work much more efficiently and with more perfection and are replacements for humans.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • contemporary world
  • physical inactivity
  • chronic diseases
  • mental wellbeing
  • healthcare expenditure
  • active transport
  • workplace wellness
  • community engagement
  • public infrastructure
  • preventative measures
  • holistic health
  • exercise regimen
  • nutritional awareness
  • government initiatives
  • public health campaigns
  • screen time
  • lifestyle modification
  • social connectedness
  • educational programs
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