Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Nowadays, almost all
the
people around the world have their own computers and access to the internet, so many Correct article usage
apply
children
playing
Wrong verb form
play
computer
games
. The main negative impact of playing computer
games
is the violation of the mental state
due to prolonged immersion in the gaming environment and the viable solution is changing the type of the game where violent content is not contained.
It is not a secret for everyone that playing computer
games
, especially by
Change preposition
apply
children
, can influence to
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apply
the
mental Change the word
their
state
, because of the long duration of playing the wrong kind of games
. To be more precise, the
Correct article usage
apply
games
including violence or some sort of competion
character Correct your spelling
competition
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
negatively
affects Replace the adverb
negative
to
our brain, destroying our mental Change preposition
apply
state
. For example
, when I was a child, I played the games
, such
as Call of duty about world war, and I realized that after playing this
game, I had a headache and was a little bit nervous.
A great solution to avoid destroying of
the mental Change preposition
apply
state
by playing computer
games
is changing games'
types, where the violent content is not contained. If Change noun form
games
children
play only useful games
, they will definitely get necessary
concepts. By Correct article usage
the necessary
this
I mean, that playing is not a taboo, therefore
you can get even a
good knowledge from them, just playing true Correct article usage
apply
games
. Maths and logic games
are a good example
Fix the agreement mistake
examples
for
Change preposition
of
this
,
because they improve Remove the comma
apply
skills
of the Correct article usage
the skills
children
, and children
get pleasure and knowledge at the same time. In addition
, english
Change the capitalization
English
games
is
Change the verb form
are
also
very useful, which gives
an opportunity to learn a new language in an interesting way.
To conclude, Correct subject-verb agreement
give
negative
effects of Correct article usage
the negative
computer
games
caused
by playing violent Add a missing verb
are caused
games
, which include murders, and situations that distance us from reality and it
can be solved by playing Correct pronoun usage
apply
games
with useful content, which can help the
Correct article usage
apply
children
to develop their skills.Submitted by Yeslamzhan15 on
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