Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

Nowadays, almost all
the
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people around the world have their own computers and access to the internet, so many
children
playing
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computer
games
. The main negative impact of playing
computer
games
is the violation of the mental
state
due to prolonged immersion in the gaming environment and the viable solution is changing the type of the game where violent content is not contained.  It is not a secret for everyone that playing
computer
games
, especially
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children
, can influence
to
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the
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mental
state
, because of the long duration of playing the wrong kind of
games
. To be more precise,
the
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games
including violence or some sort of
competion
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competition
character
are
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negatively
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affects
to
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our brain, destroying our mental
state
.
For example
, when I was a child, I played the
games
,
such
as Call of duty about world war, and I realized that after playing
this
game, I had a headache and was a little bit nervous. A great solution to avoid destroying
of
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the mental
state
by playing
computer
games
is changing
games'
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types, where the violent content is not contained. If
children
play only useful
games
, they will definitely get
necessary
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concepts. By
this
I mean, that playing is not a taboo,
therefore
you can get even
a
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good knowledge from them, just playing true
games
. Maths and logic
games
are a good
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this
,
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because they improve
skills
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the skills
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of the
children
, and
children
get pleasure and knowledge at the same time.
In addition
,
english
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games
is
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also
very useful, which
gives
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an opportunity to learn a new language in an interesting way. To conclude,
negative
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effects of
computer
games
caused
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by playing violent
games
, which include murders, and situations that distance us from reality and
it
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can be solved by playing
games
with useful content, which can help
the
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children
to develop their skills.
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