In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more more popular.

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In recent years,

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crime

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stories

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are

becomming

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becoming

more prevalent because those tales are more appealing

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novels and TV series surge, their detrimental impacts gradually appear in our community. One of the reasons

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criminal

stories

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are more prevalent is that it is easy to be accessed by patrons. In the past, only the

fictions

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which

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published by the publishers could be purchased in the bookstore. Most publishers due to

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about the legal

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will evaluate the

stories

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first

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potential

nagetive

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negative

social effects caused before they decide whether or not to publish

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, the

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descriptions

of criminal

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and methods were curbed to

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, along with the online bookstores and

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video

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platforms' development, the censor has been eased significantly. So that some

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stories

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have been published online which could not be accepted by former publishers.

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competition

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it worse.

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prespectives

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, surely,

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have the right to see or read

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criminal

stories

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. But

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could access those materials is

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and

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teenagers

are more likely to watch them, and they

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inclinate

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to mimic what they see or read because their thoughts are developing and they lack resistance and self-discipline. So we could

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get answers from the

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data that young

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and

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teenagers

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rate is raising

drasticly

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. To solve those issues, we should make

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online bookstores, entertainment

platform

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, authors and producers accountable for their publishments by implementing strict regulations about which kinds of

storiesthey

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stories they

could publish and could be accessed by young

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. In conclusion, I

unstand

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understand

that

crime

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novels and TV

crime

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series are more

attrective

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attractive

and profitable.

By producing

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those kinds of

stories

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will increase their popularity and revenue, but they cannot put their interests above the public interest,

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, they need to know that the benefits and consequences are closely linked.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more more popular.

Fully explain your ideas

You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem.

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arys and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disgree?

Some people believe that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad. Others, however, say that life for the elderly nowadays is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more material and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal.