Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreing language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experince.

For decades, individuals have been utilizing
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speaking other domestic languages.
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society claims that being
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in
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a particular
language
is just essential for
employement
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employment
opportunities and being able to consider
differenet
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different
kinds of
vocation
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options. In fact, it is observed that
language
plays a huge role in
the
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business
life
and holiday options, at the same time one can utilize it for more opportunities.
Initially
, the most essential job
requirements
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in the
21th
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century
is
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being at least
bilangual
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bilingual
;
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likewise
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, to discover new
kind
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of continents and countries
instead
of just spending time in your hometown. There is a direct
colaration
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colouration
collaboration
between business
life
and
language
due to
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amount of
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along
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graduated
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.
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Elimination
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process in corporate
life
include
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the ability
of speaking
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to speak
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different
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a different
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kind
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of languages, due to
world's
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situation. Today's corporate
life
has
became
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more universal than ever before. On the
otherhand
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other hand
,
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going abroad and to have
unusual
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holiday is seeking
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the ablitiy
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ablitiy
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ability
for speaking
language
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.
Language
is a key
for
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to
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going into the
varies
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cultures deeply, creating some sense of humour and feeling the local lifestyle. To
undersdant
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understand
the country,
and
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explore the different parts of it, to see the art on the street,
language
has
a
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enormous role. All in all, these two points mentioned above are just the two facilities that can
provided
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by
language
out of many. Yes, two points highlighted before have a significant effect
for
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learning
language
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the language
a language
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. Apart from these, it is
usefull
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useful
for, being
global
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a global
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citizen and making
your
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progress
in
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from
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your view of point. Being universal is ensured by
differenet
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different
kind
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kinds
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of
behavior
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behaviour
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that individuals should
shows
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up. The
first
step to be is being
huge
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a huge
the huge
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amount of
language
to discover other cultures and
improving
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feeling
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the feeling
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of
emphatises
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emphasis
.
By
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that way, human beings can create
healty
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healthy
connections together and can help
eachother
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each other
even more.
Besides
, developing a massive view of point and
a
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vision
requires the
ablity
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ability
to feel other societies and
life styles
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lifestyles
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,
that is
the way
for
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expand
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your
vision
, without
feel
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feeling
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any other people
human
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humans
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can not build a great
vision
. Overall, knowledge
in
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of
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language
has
surprisingly
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huge amount
effects
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when we
takes
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being
global
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a global
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citizen and developing a
vision
into account. In conclusion, some people believe that the facilities of knowing
other
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another
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language
is
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limited by 2,
however
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these supporting reasons
such
as being advanced in business and holidays
life
and having a universal personality with a massive
vision
show us how is
signifcant
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significant
to know as much as
language
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the language
a language
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we can.
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