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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreing language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experince.

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speaking other domestic languages.
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society claims that being
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in
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 a particular
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 is just essential for
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employment
 opportunities and being able to consider
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different
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 options. In fact, it is observed that
language
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 plays a huge role in
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business
life
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 and holiday options, at the same time one can utilize it for more opportunities.
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, the most essential job
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 being at least
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bilingual
;
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likewise
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, to discover new
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 of continents and countries
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 of just spending time in your hometown. There is a direct
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colouration
collaboration
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 and
language
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quality
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graduated
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.
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 process in corporate
life
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include
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 the ability
of speaking
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different
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kind
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 of languages, due to
world's
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the world's
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 situation. Today's corporate
life
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 has
became
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 more universal than ever before. On the
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other hand
,
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 going abroad and to have
unusual
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 holiday is seeking
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the ablitiy
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ablitiy
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ability
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language
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the language
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.
Language
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 is a key
for
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 cultures deeply, creating some sense of humour and feeling the local lifestyle. To
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understand
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explore the different parts of it, to see the art on the street,
language
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 has
a
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 enormous role. All in all, these two points mentioned above are just the two facilities that can
provided
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 by
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 out of many. Yes, two points highlighted before have a significant effect
for
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on
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language
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the language
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. Apart from these, it is
usefull
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useful
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global
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a global
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 citizen and making
your
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progress
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 your view of point. Being universal is ensured by
differenet
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different
kind
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kinds
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 of
behavior
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 that individuals should
shows
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 up. The
first
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a huge
the huge
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 amount of
language
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 to discover other cultures and
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feeling
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the feeling
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 of
emphatises
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emphasis
.
By
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 that way, human beings can create
healty
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healthy
 connections together and can help
eachother
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each other
 even more.
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, developing a massive view of point and
a
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vision
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 requires the
ablity
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ability
 to feel other societies and
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life styles
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lifestyles
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,
that is
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for
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expand
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expanding
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 your
vision
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, without
feel
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feeling
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 any other people
human
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humans
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 can not build a great
vision
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. Overall, knowledge
in
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language
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 has
surprisingly
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a surprisingly
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 huge amount
effects
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effect
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 when we
takes
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global
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a global
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 citizen and developing a
vision
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 into account. In conclusion, some people believe that the facilities of knowing
other
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language
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is
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 limited by 2,
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however
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 these supporting reasons
such
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 as being advanced in business and holidays
life
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 and having a universal personality with a massive
vision
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 show us how is
signifcant
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significant
 to know as much as
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language
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the language
a language
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 we can.
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