You live in a small apartment building with a parking lot in back, and you often cannot find an empty parking space when you get home from work. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • describe the situation • explain why it bothers you • suggest something the landlord could do to solve the problem Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

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Dear Charlie, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health. As you know, I drive to the office on the weekdays and return in the evening by 6 pm. By the time I am back, it has so often been the case that I cannot find an empty parking space. Due to

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parking lot issue, I have to keep my car a couple of blocks away and walk back to my apartment. It is a pain since I am worried about the safety of my vehicle.

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, I have to travel a mile in the morning just to get my car to leave for the office.

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, delaying my entire schedule for the day. I would suggest you help me with the building management to reserve spots according to the units.

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, if you could bring

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to the notice of the manager that outsiders should not be allowed to park in our building's space will be very assuring. Kindly take my advice into consideration. I hope to hear from you soon on the same. Yours sincerely, KD

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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