You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email ·give details of the purchase ·describe the problem ·explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that a series of problems with some clothing I bought in your shop

last

week. For my son's birthday party, I chose a cartoon suit from your webshop, but I feel disappointed when I received your parcel.

Firstly

, the package had broken at the side of the box which could make

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the inside clothing. Fortunately, it didn't happen.

However

, I accept the problems of clothing, which

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is different from your online pictures, the real one is darker, that looks dirty.

Additionally

, the size is bigger than your customer service describes, even though I affirmed many times with her. Because of the former questions I mentioned, I need a replacement urgently due to my son's birthday will be coming

week, I appreciate you could notice

this

problem and deliver new suitable clothing. I look forward to hearing from you and seeing the positive change at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Joanna Shen

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

165 words

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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email ·give details of the purchase ·describe the problem ·explain why you need a replacement urgently

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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