With internet improvement people can & opinions on certain goods or service that they purchased. Is this good or bad thing? . Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
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people
have an opportunity to share their opinion on purchased goods or service
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It is not a secret for anyone that all of us look at the reviews
on certain goods that we want to purchase, thereby we are
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reviews
. However
, sometimes people
write negative reviews
without arguments just to reduce the number of sales of this
product
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world full of competition, it is easy to spoil the goods of someone else's service by writing a bad review about it. In my country, for example
, there was one accident, where people
wrote a lot of negative reviews
about food
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The internet gave us a great opportunity to share our opinions in relation to purchased items or service
. By Fix the agreement mistake
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, we can highlight the advantages and disadvantages of the item, also
giving some advice to future owners. Additionally
, we can look at the reviews
of the buyers, before purchasing the item, thereby evaluate
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product
, and based on this
make your choice. For example
, I always use this
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when I want to buy something,
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this
product
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In conclusion, this
is a great option
for people
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product
and also
checking the reviews
of the owners in order to make the best choice, so I strongly believe that this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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