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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disagreement with your opinion which has published in the article in the national newspaper on 20th September about the appearance of town centres in my country look alike. I am pleased to say that most of your findings were appreciated. As you mentioned that the infrastructure of the cities was similar.
In addition
 with, shopping complexes, hospitals, and school facilities are making the municipal area crowded, and the traffic controlling department has been providing limited service.
However
, I would like to draw your attention to my city centre, which is situating the riverside. The area in which I have been residing is quite different from others.
This
 part of the country has provided a plethora of spaces for parking and separate footpaths for the people who are walking daily.
This
 would help the authorities to control the high volume of crowds.
On the other hand
, the architecture of the centre is
also
 unlike others. I would be grateful, if possible you could visit and explore the beauty of my city. If you are considering my offer that would be a pleasure for me to guide you. Yours faithfully, Asha
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