Some people think that watching TV causes weight problems in children. Do you agree with this view? What solution you can suggest to tackle children’s weight problem?

Many people find the cause of children’s obesity in watching Tv. I think that watching

television

is not the primary cause of the

weight

problems of kids, but can be an issue if there is overtime in staring at it. In

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essay, I will give more detail on how extent I agree or disagree with

this

affirmation and I will look for some solution to weigh the matter.

To begin

with, I think the problem is not just merely watching the

television

, but the overtime passed on it. In fact, if a child pass too many hours in front of a technological dispositive, he will not have time to spend

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activities that could stimulate his metabolism. Nowadays, it is not rare to find kids of 4-5 years who already know how to use proper

technology

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,

this

happens because more often parents leave them staring at the machinery, to have some more time for themselves.

Besides

, I think that another reason why child gains

weight

is the constant presence of fast food on the territory. Eating there is faster,

therefore

in a daily routine where we are all busy with jobs and other activities, lead

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to eat there,

instead

of thinking of a salutary diet, causing

weight

issue,

such

as obesity. So, I can say that I agree

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that statement, which say that watching

television

bring

weight

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, but I can not totally agree because it is not the only reason. Finding a solution, I can suggest

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eating

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salutary and having some

hobby

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different from just using machinery and watching

television

,

such

as make sport,

for

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swimming.

Furthermore

, I believe that even the government should address

this

issue, prompt more activities on the territory,

such

as group games and limit

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eating at fast food under a certain age. To conclude, I’m firmly convinced that

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parents and government act

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regulate

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gain

weight

, kids could be healthier.