Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views anf give your opinion.

These days, participating as

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in educational institutes, when being under

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accepted age, is one the most contemporary controversies, which advocates insisting on it due to the fact of preventing priceless times,

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, because of some medical problems

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as

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behaviours and desolation patterns, disputers believe that children should initiate studying since being old enough. On the one hand, under usual circumstances, the off-springs are going to start their career in education between 6 to 8 years old.

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with, several experts suggest that the roughly 4-year period prior to spending

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in

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beneficial in terms of learning how to read and write. According to an essay in World Population Magazine, which examined approximately 10 thousand

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pupils, the ones who went earlier to school, were noticeably more successful among others and had so much extra

time

in order to be taught another skill; take the

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sessions of playing instruments as the most patently obvious example. The sooner they

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enrolling

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schools, the more useful consequences could be available for them, have

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time

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for instance

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On the other hand

, we as

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and

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are responsible for our toddlers and

pre-school

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preschool

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children in regard to mental health.

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, many

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psychologists

psychologist

and

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reccomend

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closely supportive

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with individuals

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2-6.

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, they

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represent, taking them

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separate

from the warm family environment, can cause irreversible damage to their personalities.

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, the signs of depression

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as having no

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and speaking so much with themselves are reported interestingly so much in these students. To conclude, in spite of the fact that

time

is precious, plus the great chances of learning while growing are easily

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accessible

for

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of human beings, make them save so much

time

and energy to learn more talents, I strongly believe that due to the significance of experience, preventing future

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disastrous

diseases

such

as mental ones, children are better to start school courses when their age is usually older enough.