some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation , such as unsatisfactory job.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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circumstances. Some individuals think that it best Try and improve
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other
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notions along wilt my perspective with a logical conclusion in impending fragments. On the one hand,there are umpteen reasons why
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even in bad
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person is
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he or she will be ready to do
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it is good or bad.The person's need is to just
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the demand of their family.
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and he is working
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he will not be interested to change the
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as he is getting whatever his goals are.
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,in the year 2011,the findings revealed the fact that 60
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of people are doing their
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without asking any questions and without taking care of bad
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as they are earning well.
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,there are many people who want to improve the
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environment. To elaborate
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love to
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healthy environment so they try to improve the
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so that they can do
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work
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with more energy and in
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manner.
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, individuals who are ambitious and
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will try to improve the problems as if no problem will be there only
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employees can get growth and
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amount of salary which will automatically
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of an
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conducted by
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and loss
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organization
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in the year 2012, the findings revealed that 80
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of companies able to reach
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the
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heights
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employers
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their best efforts to improve the
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of a company. To recapitulate,
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it is better to do the
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to
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the basic needs of
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,
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but doing
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job
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by improving things can be more fruitful

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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