A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dera
Ryna
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Ryan
, Hope you're doing well I am happy to
listen
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that
finally
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you are planning to go on a
camp site
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campsite
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vacation
this
summer. As per my advice, you can explore various peaceful trekking routes in Kasol. It is a town in Himachal
pradesh
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Pradesh
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which has
a diverse options
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a diverse option
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of adventurous activities. After experiencing
such
thrills in the mountains you will get an adrenaline rush which makes you feel calm
nd
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and
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composed in shades of nature.Not only
this
, you will love the beauty of
place
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because after harsh long
ways
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,ways
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there are beautiful locations waiting for you at the top.
However
, you might get injuries during your trip at these sites have non-plain,tilted and complex pathways but walking through them fills a person with
competitive
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spirit. It is not possible for me to accompany you
this
time due to my training but I hope that
next
year we will definitely go together Yours lovingly Yogita
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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