These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Education
is an industry that has seen significant change over the years. Aside from the
curriculum
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the medium of
education
has become diverse with the advancement in technology.
Students
no longer have to study at universities but can opt for online
courses
. There are both pros and cons
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preferring online
courses
over attending lectures. One might argue that online
courses
will save commuting
time
especially if they live at a distance from universities. In
such
cases
instead
of investing say, 3 hours on travel, a student will likely prefer to take online
courses
. They can spend the
time
saved on assignments
instead
. Some online
courses
are
self paced
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or pre-recorded and
students
can choose to attend the
courses
at any
time
during the day.
Such
flexible arrangements can motivate more people to take up
university
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a university
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degree
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while
for example
having a
part
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time
job. Attending universities have
their
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share of benefits. They provide a more conducive learning environment and opportunities for interaction with lecturers.
In
addition
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it promotes peer learning , by creating a healthy learning space for the
students
to learn from one another.
This
method is can be ideal for
students
who lack
self motivation
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as
this
forces a routine. I believe that
long distance
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education
is preferred for
students
who do not have a university in their near vicinity but would still like to educate themselves.
However
, if there is a chance to attend a university it is the preferred method of
education
as it promotes an organic learning methodology.
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