Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: ● Say why you would like to go on the trip ● Suggest what you could do to help during the trip ● Ask other questions about the trip

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in a three-day international school trip in the parent's group category. I am very keen to see Dubai country. Actually,I was waiting for
this
opportunity since
last
year when a friend of mine told me about the glory of gardens in Dubai. As I am a master's in Botany,I will love to visit
such
places with a bunch of colourful flowers surmounted in different shapes which enhances my knowledge. Regarding my company, I can manage student groups in an organised way because I have good leadership skills.
Additionally
,I am a good entertainer in the area of music which will make
this
trip a memorable one. If I am the one for whom you are looking for the tour,
then
I would like to ask about the list of things which are must carry.
Also
,attach the travel documents with it. I am awaiting an affirmative reply from your end. Yours sincerely, Ryan Williams
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enthusiastic
  • valuable experience
  • expertise
  • educational objectives
  • supervision
  • ensure safety
  • bonding
  • workshops
  • logistics
  • coordinates
  • travel arrangements
  • clear communication
  • support
  • responsibilities
  • manage schedules
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