In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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changed rapidly over the 20th century. There is no doubt that
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means of
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the direction without driver assistance. There are many benefits as well as drawbacks with
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changes, while it seems to me that
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negatives. On the one hand, driverless vehicles would decrease
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weakness
and errors, which means that the rate of accidents and automobile
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will be dropped significantly.
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, sleepiness while driving is one of the huge reasons
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and causes
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physical injuries;
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,
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would not happen unless man
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.
In addition
, staff who are responsible for guiding and driving the means of
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will no longer
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therefore
, not only the government financial budgets for public
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drivers will cut off but
also
society pay no more taxes for these facilities.
Furthermore
, if personal cars could work and run their directions, many people and families would benefit
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this
stressful and short-time life.
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, imagine that parents will be able to commute their children from school to home, and
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about
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their hours.
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, private cars and public
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without
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means
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that various jobs and p will be eliminated.
As a result
, the majority of people who work in these kinds of activities will lose their jobs.
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many unemployed, different opportunities would create. The government should buckle down and find them
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situations. For illustrate,
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man who was
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befor
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before
, could be trained and learn how to work with computer instruments to be charged for setting the times of
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system start and stop. In conclusion, driverless transportation would have many pros
such
as
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errors and
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reduction and
also
assist the community to save
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while it would make many occupations vacant;
However
, it seems that the benefits are more than the negatives and could outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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