Many animals are kept in zoos today. What are the advantages of keeping animals in the zoo?

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men care for

animals

or should humans leave

animals

on their own concerns many people. Particularly, should

animals

be kept in

zoos

or should they live in their natural environment

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This

essay will explore both advantages and disadvantages of maintaining

zoos

. Protection of endangered species and educational purposes are commonly named as the reasons for creating artificial habitats for

animals

. Due to

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various events,

such

as the development of trade and climate change, many species are becoming extinct.

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, they require

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special protection. At the same time,

zoos

are

also

a great opportunity, for both children and adults, to get familiar with

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wild nature and see

animals

that they would probably never meet in real life.

However

, there could be mentioned a few negative aspects of

zoos

such

as

lack

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of freedom for

animals

and unsustainable living conditions. Many

animals

are stressed owing to the fact that they are removed from their natural habitat.

Additionally

, the artificial

envionment

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environment

that humans

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built is not sustainable.

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,

animals

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lives are in danger in case of any emergency situation.

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is clearly shown by the recent explosion in the aquarium in Berlin.

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outbreak

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lead

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to

thousands

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fishes dead. To conclude, it has been demonstrated that

animals'

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protection and infotainment are the main advantages of keeping

animals

in

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zoos

.

Although

, they are accompanied by

disavantages

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disadvantages

such

as unsustainable

environment

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environments

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and unnatural

life

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living

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conditions for the

animals

.