Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are many others who think that good resources to get
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newspapers
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online
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. But I strongly believed that a good way to get
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through
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online
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by the
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technology
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revolution has been increasing due to new
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is the internet. Due to that fact,
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often use mobile phones and laptops for access to the internet because they could get the latest
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through it.
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, social
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act
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a big role in society published by true
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and
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could get
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more fast
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rather than
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. the reason behind
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if there is anything happening around us as soon as possible
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social
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and letters on it could
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among
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, humans can get true
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around the world.
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, it is so powerful way to get
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rather than a newspaper. For insurance, In ,Srilanka one government lost the election due influence of social
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, before social
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people
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have limited resources to get
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,
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often read
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some of are watching television
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. But
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media
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often published
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regarding one
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before. because they are printing
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in the evening and need transport all around the country.
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, it published
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not 100% true. Due to that
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social
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is most popular with
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, in Srilanka
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always deliver to the
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with one
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gap. In conclusion, in my ,opinion
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can get true
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and breaking
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through social
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and its most famous
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with the
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rather than a newspaper.
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