Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are many others who think that good resources to get
news
by
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newspapers
.
However
, some others believed that a good way to get
news
from
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online
media
. But I strongly believed that a good way to get
news
through
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is through
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online
media
. To commence with, in
this
modern era,
day
by the
day
technology
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revolution has been increasing due to new
invention
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.
Therefore
, the best invention made by
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a human
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human
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is the internet. Due to that fact,
people
often use mobile phones and laptops for access to the internet because they could get the latest
news
through it.
Also
, social
media
act
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a big role in society published by true
news
and
people
could get
news
more fast
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rather than
newspapers
. the reason behind
this
,
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thatthat
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that that
if there is anything happening around us as soon as possible
people
upload it
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social
media
and letters on it could
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among
people
.
Consequently
, humans can get true
news
around the world.
Also
, it is so powerful way to get
news
rather than a newspaper. For insurance, In ,Srilanka one government lost the election due influence of social
media
.
On the contrary
, before social
media
people
have limited resources to get
news
.
Therefore
,
people
often read
newspapers
some of are watching television
news
. But
this
media
often published
news
regarding one
day
before. because they are printing
newspapers
in the evening and need transport all around the country.
Also
, it published
news
not 100% true. Due to that
fact
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social
media
news
is most popular with
people
.
For example
, in Srilanka
newspapers
always deliver to the
people
with one
day
gap. In conclusion, in my ,opinion
people
can get true
news
and breaking
news
through social
media
and its most famous
media
with the
people
rather than a newspaper.
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