Many cities repalce farmlands and parks with houses .Is it positive or negative?
Farming
areas
and public free spaces are replaced by residences, which can cause devastating public health and social problems.
On the one hand, agricultural land depletion can have a negative impact on a country's economy and food
security.As a result
of unplanned population growth, particularly in metropolises, cropland is being drastically reduced in order to build houses.Consequently
, the country's food
production has decreased and now mostly depends on imported food
. Food
safety is ensured when a country produces enough food
for its people
.For example
, a few years ago, large areas
of coconut lands were cleared by land sale companies, resulting in a lack of coconut products because, while demand for coconuts increased, supply decreased due to lower productivity, and raw coconuts were eventually imported, severely affecting the county's economy.
On the other hand
, the residence's
physical and mental health can be affected by reducing the park Replace the word
residents's
areas
, which are used by residences
for outdoor activities Replace the word
residents
such
as physical exercise , sports, and family and friend gatherings that contribute to people
's physical and mental stamina. For example
, students who live far away from their homes and family members can meet people
in the city park, which will help them avoid loneliness; at the same time, people
come to the park on a daily basis to exercise and relax rather than going to expensive sports centers
.
Change the spelling
centres
In addition
, parks in the city provide green space and a balanced ecosystem. Plants absorb carbon dioxide, the primary cause of global climate change, and release oxygen, as well as providing
habitat for animals Wrong verb form
provide
such
as birds.Biosyesmen may be harmed due to the reduction of free spaces.Furthermore
, plants serve as natural barriers for
noise, which is one of the main problems in cities.
In conclusion, reducing farming and public Change preposition
to
areas
can lead to severe social and health issues, and in addition
, the city's eco system
may be depleted.Correct your spelling
ecosystem
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