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Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course. Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter: ● Give details about the course ● Describe what equipment you will need for the course ● Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to enquire about the facilities present in your conference centre.Since our company is planning to organise a training course over there, I want to know the minute details of the infrastructure of the campus. Regarding the training of staff, my manager is going to share his international experience of management skills as he came back from Japan
last
 week after spending six months at head office.
This
 will boost the employees to do work in a planned manner.
Although
 I heard good points about your place, I want to confirm
regarding
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the present status of various equipment
such
 as hundred chairs, a wide table and a whiteboard.
Moreover
, I would like to ask about the working of a mike system as it is the most prior tool to start the presentation.
Additionally
,Is there any possibility to arrange brunch for up to ninety people? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Yogita Gupta
Submitted by Yogita  on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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