Several old urban settlements are undergoing
modernisation
. It is argued that
this
change is inevitable in nature and
this
has its own merits and demerits of its own.
This
essay will analyse both sides of the coin.
On the one hand,
modernisation
is a boon for
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human civilisation. Since it has introduced new and advanced technology for us.
For example
, there are many machines available
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help us in our
life,
such
as Washing machines, microwaves etc.
Furthermore
,
modernisation
has brought better education and health facilities.
For instance
, the better machines available in the hospitals
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better diagnosis.
Also
, schools have been equipped with smart boards and other tools which improvise
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learning.
On the other hand
,
modernisation
has
also
been a curse with regard to culture and
.
Firstly
, due to
this
, we have lost our cultural value. We have been inclined to
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approach
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life with
modernisation
which led to the loss of our own cultural identity. To illustrate,nowadays,we all dress up in
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western attire and rarely
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seen with
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occasion.
Secondly
, the indigenous
are
also
suffering due to the increased trade with
modernisation
.
For instance
, we all rely on big international brands like H&M,
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and hardly sight into our
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brands.
In short,
modernisation
is coming our way with its own benefits and drawbacks. It is one's conscience to
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to what extent they would like to adopt it.