Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends were you stayed at their house. They have just send you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends, in your letter: Thank them for the holday and the photos Explain why didn't write earlier Invite them to come and stay with you

#month #holiday #friends #house #photos #holday

Dear joy and Jennifer, It's

such

a short time since we

last

saw but it feels much longer. I haven't recovered from the hangover from our

last

holiday. I just want t to thank you for your to had been a wonderful host and for the photos which you send

last

week. You have captured all the memorable moments in our holiday. I told John about your secret recipes and the amazing food you prepared for us. Some of my office tasks are pending while I am on vacation, which I am required to finish on time,

that is

the reason I couldn't write earlier. What do you think to stay at my place for the Christmas holidays? In our town, we have a famous Christmas market and a carnival at that time. I am sure that you will not be disappointed. The town is just beautiful and we have a lot of things to explore here. Let me know what you think! With love, Ann

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends were you stayed at their house. They have just send you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends, in your letter: Thank them for the holday and the photos Explain why didn't write earlier Invite them to come and stay with you

The Closing

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