I live in Southampton city. It is a medium sized town. I have been living there for a half

I live in Southampton city. It is a medium-sized town. I have been living there for half a year. I live with my aunt and cousin. Southampton is
peaceful
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and comfortable place to live, and one of the main benefits of it is that it is not as crowded as London
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. The locality where I live is
also
very nice.
Although
I live in the city centre it is not noisy, mainly because there are not many vehicles on the road. In fact, it is a calm, quiet and clean area. The drainage system, rubbish disposal and water supply are very good here. There are a lot of trees all around. So the place is
also
green and shady and the air is fresh, not to mention the fact that it is a port city. With all access to the
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beaches it becomes really easy to fall in love with the town
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in summer.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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