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People who live in cities often complain about traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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In
this
 busy world, it is fact that nowadays the numbers of vehicles increase drastically so everyone has to face
traffic
 problems ,especially those living in the cities. They often have a question about
this
 dispute. So here I will give some the reasons along with solutions in the
further
 essay.
To begin
 with,
first
 and foremost reason is each and every person have a tight busy schedule of their work so they do not want to take the risk to
use
 public transport and do transportation with their own scooter.
For Example
, one research conducted by The Times of India found that of those who
use
 private vehicles among them 70% of the population
use
 a private scooter because public transportation buses are not quite frequent so every crowd must have to face
traffic
 congestion and they
also
 file complaints.
On the other hand
, every trouble has a solution same way to solve
this
 issue The authorities and individuals both have to support a certain type of rule and implement it in their routine life.
Firstly
, Government have to develop buses with fix time table so people can easily
use
 them.
Moreover
, the government can
also
 expand the roads which will be great relaxation for citizens.
Secondly
, individuals must have to follow
traffic
 rules. If they obey wisely
then
 they will not face
traffic
. In conclusion, people must have to be aware of the
traffic
 trouble and
also
 support the authorities to obey all the rules of
traffic
 like the speed limit, and red light signals.
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