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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. there are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think that having a range of subjects is better for children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#parents #opportunities #children #people #schools #skills #range #subjects #future
Children
 are always precious to their
parents
 and due to
this
 reason they try to give
the
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 best in
everyways
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every ways
every way
every way's
. Teaching
skills
is
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are
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 more beneficial to
children
 according to some
parents
, whereas others are more focussed on
teching
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teaching
 their
children
 through a variety of subjects in schools. School is always the centre of learning through fun and experience which
is
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in later times gradually getting become a centre for competition and gathering booking knowledge.
Therefore
children
 get monotonous to continue lectures
in
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 a wide range of topics making their childhood more serious. Without any
doubt
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children
 will learn and gather knowledge from different courses but not through hours of long classes. Providing reading materials, slides and notes can give
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idea
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 about an object but
children
 will face
lack
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a lack
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 of "know how to use that object practically. For an instance,
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a student
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student
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students
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 who
get
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 to know the theory of gravity
have
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 to know how
this
 theory can be applied in lots of
ares
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areas
. Institutions
also
 introduce sets of
skills
besides
 theoretical
class
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classes
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.
Secondly
, education without practical
skills
have
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 no value in present times. A
gradute
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graduate
 who is specialized in software or
have
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expertize
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expertise
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on
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in
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 mechanics or automobile will not be unemployed. While a good score in some particular subjects can not make someone eligible for
competitive
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 job world.
Parents
 need to contemplate
on
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the fact that what
his
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or
her
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children
 will
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 to do in future
affected
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is affected
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 by what and how they are learning.
Furthermore
, different categories of
skills
 are offered to
childred
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children
 based on their interest and capacity to grab, as every child is unique in her or his own way. It is not necessary for everyone to complete higher studies, while
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the country
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country
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countries
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 required different sets of talents for different purposes. To conclude,
parents
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parents'
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 love and affections have no bounds for their
children
 but they have to consider
that
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what is
his
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their
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child
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 interest, so their only responsibility is to
mold
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their childrens'
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childrens'
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 future
accordingly
.
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