Your grandparents are planning a family gathering. They want to have a fun weekend somewhere. You know a perfect place to have the event. Write them an email and include the following things: • Tell them about the place you have in mind. • Talk about your experiences at the place. • Describe what the family can do there.

Dear Grandma and Grandpa, I just wanted to send you a quick email to talk about our family gathering
this
summer. I think it is a great idea to have a fun weekend together, and I know the perfect place! There is a campground near Drumheller that has the perfect amenities to host a big group like our family. I went there
last
summer with my friends and we had a blast! We spent most of our time fishing, but there are lots of other things to do there. Our family could do a lot of different activities at
this
place. It has mini golf, beach volleyball, canoe rentals, and an outdoor swimming pool! Our family could spend
the
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days doing fun activities and
then
have good conversations around the campfire in the evenings. Anyway, I just wanted to let you guys know about
this
place. I know the whole family would have a great time there! Should I book it for a weekend in July? I look forward to seeing you! Love, Alex
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