Some people say that completing University education is the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills are important Discuss both sides and give your opinion

The phenomenon of students should continue their

education

at university or rapidly

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a

job

after graduation from high school in order to have a better career path has aroused wide concern among wide circles. Divergent as people's views on

this

issue in question may be, I personally believe that receiving

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schooling at the academy would bring more importance to their career. On the one hand, people who choose to find a

job

to gain experience and soft

skills

are essential to their future.

For instance

, many companies only hire people who have experience and well communication

skills

.

Moreover

, soft

skills

are useful for many jobs in different fields like team-building would help in working with myriad types of colleagues and analysis ability can help to find the core problem.

Therefore

, many parents support their children to find a

job

after school immediately.

On the other hand

,

education

at university would teach students professional knowledge and

skills

in order to allow them to get their dream

job

. Nowadays, many and many fields tend to develop by combining science and information technology. So, professional knowledge and the newest skill are popular with most corporations. As civilization continues to develop, the high

education

requirement

job

will be more than now.

As a result

, holding an academy certification is more significant in the future. Under

this

line of thinking,

although

both sides would bring more

job

opportunities to us, university curriculums get us the ability to keep our value in the

job

market even in the future. It seems to be that completing academic

education

is more important.