In some countries, people waste a lot of food that they have bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food in that way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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In recent years, the number of people who eat in restaurants has gradually escalated, especially because the pandemic is almost over.
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sometimes did not finish their meal due to
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portion and bad taste. I personally believe that kind of
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can be overcome by
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size before ordering and choosing the cuisine wisely.
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personal eagerness to eat, several eating places provide huge portions per plate. The purposes might be various and depend on the target markets in the
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place. Providing
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eatery
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will be effective for
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families
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or
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who conduct gathering,
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who came alone will encounter difficulties
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the
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taste of
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was another reason why customers stopped eating.
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of craving more spoons of meat, people who find out that the taste was not appropriate
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their tongue, would choose to just leave the meat. It was not caused by
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of the chef, yet purely because of the type of restaurant. To prevent that issues, we, as customers should prepare ourselves to be wise. We knew our eating capacity well;
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we should make sure the proportion of
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food
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we order is fit. We could ask the waiters about the size and if the portion was too large for us, we could consume it together with friends or colleagues.
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recommended menus are the best action to avoid wasting
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was marked by the majority of people who tasted it,
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it can
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the joy of that meal. All in all, when we eat in
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restaurants, we sometimes did not finish our meals due to oversize portions and bad flavour,
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, asking the waitress about the portion and choosing wisely can avoid these problems.
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