More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating?
In
this
digital era, there has been an increase of
Change preposition
in
technology
that allows people
to communicate or to
conduct Fix the infinitive
apply
a
group Correct article usage
apply
meeting
. Fix the agreement mistake
meetings
Furthermore
, this
essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of this
trend.
To commence with, the positive effect of technology
is saving time. Conducting meetings from anywhere can reduce one's time consumption for commuting to one meeting room. [Example]. In addition
, virtual communication can widen the scope of Correct article usage
an individual's
individual's
networking. Change noun form
individual
For instance
, a student who want
to apply for an international scholarship may be difficult to find other applicants in the same country Change the verb form
wants
with
him or her. Change preposition
as
Then
, by using WhatsApp or Telegram, the student might be allowed to contact people
from other countries just by searching their contact from internet
. As a consequence, Add an article
the internet
this
way can broaden one's networking.
On the other hand
, the disadvantage of technology
is prone to be interfered
Change to the active voice
interfere
have interfered
.
Unlike metropolitan Change preposition
with.
city
, some rural areas may not have well-constructed facilities for Fix the agreement mistake
cities
technology
such
as a tower. Hence
, in that area, the signal probably is poor and it cannot be a disturbance when people
want to keep in touch each
other. Change preposition
with each
Additionally
, technology
cannot be accessed by all people
. without having sufficient knowledge of technology
, not
tech-savvy user will probably cannot properly operate their gadget.
In conclusion, the positive effect of Add an article
the not
this
case are
not Change the verb form
is
time-consumptive
way and enable to bridge Correct article usage
a time-consumptive
friendship
in Fix the agreement mistake
friendships
larger
Add an article
a larger
the larger
area
. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
However
, the disadvantages are not widely accessible for
everyone and some interferences because of the signal. Change preposition
to
Hence
, this
phenomenon has both advantages and disadvantages.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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