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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

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We live in an age when many of us are a great number of human beings believe that up-to-date speech technology is having few cons
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social connection. I strongly disagree with the given topic due to the fact that
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 we can make better our linked communication. If I lived in
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 negative results. Many support the view that they said that "their
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 adolescent. Plus play with them by doing so each one's communication comprehensive will strengthen.
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 the whole nine yards that have been stated so far up to dated communication machinery promoting our connections the particular reason for circumstance face-to-face strengthens relationships in spite of the fact that internet correlation more and more sustains alliance.
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