You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, - describe the training course you want to do - explain what the company could do to help you - say how the course will be useful for your job Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#work #company #advertisement #course #job #manager #sir #madam

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to

request

for

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permission and assistance for a training

course

I would like to participate

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in.

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Last

week, I came across an advertisement for a training

course

related to geotechnical engineering, mainly targeting

the

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graduates.

This

training is called "Basics of geotechnical

feild

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field

investigation"; run by Engineers Australia.

This

course

aims to educate the

fundermentals

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fundamentals

of geology around Melbourne and the types of investigation undertaken for

a tunnel designs

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Firstly

, I would like to

request

your permission for one

week

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leave

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for

this

course

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the start of April.

Secondly

, May I please

request

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a $

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1500 company

sponsership

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sponsorship

for

this

course

? I strongly believe

this

learning will be beneficial for my career and the company. As you may know, I am currently working

for

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tunneling

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project.

This

induction will enhance my knowledge and give me confidence

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my workplace. Not only will

this

opportunity help me gain

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insight

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into

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the investigation, but

also

to expand my connections

between

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with

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peers in the industry. I hope you would appreciate my

request

and provide me

this

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golden opportunity. Thank you for your consideration and I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully,

Ramyen

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Ramen

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200 words

6.50

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Clear and correct grammar

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