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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work.

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Dear: Sir I
work
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 in a company.
This
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 company's
work
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very
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 difficult
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 my lessons will finish at 4 o'
clock
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 and my
work
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 will start at 5 o'
clock
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 and will finish at 10 o'
clock
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 but at
this
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 time you close the doors. Even some of the time I had to spend the night on the street The problem is that you close the doors at 9 o'
clock
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 and my
work
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 ends at 10 o'
clock
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. I want to move to another
room
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 because in our
room
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 guys are not humane Could you please not close the doors until 10 o'
clock
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 before my
work
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 is over as well as I want to transfer
me
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apply
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to another
room
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 or change the guys in our
room
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 I think you will solve l problem Elmuradov Ozod
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