Some people think that nespapers are the best way to learn about current events. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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changes
alot
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a lot
in human daily life.
News
will get in our mobiles
any where
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in the world, where accessing the
internet
. But, many people
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that
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type of
news
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the original.
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both views. On one hand, adults
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rely on social media more. Through
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the internet
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internet
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they will get more entertainment and
news
without television.
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, if people
wants
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to know live
news
like cricket matches, and election results, they don't want to sit
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a home. They can watch wherever they are just access to
internet
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is enough.
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,
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the news
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is spreading through social media applications
to
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easy access. Nowadays, there are plenty
newspaper
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companies are
shutdown
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due to
lack
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of customers.
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, there is popular media like BBC, and India today, still they are telecasting their
news
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through television channels only. Older people like to watch
these
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type
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of
news
, they believe that channels will telecast
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genuine
news
.
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, despite
of
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,
internet
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still some
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companies running successfully.
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, adults feel that reading
news
is better than watching electronic devices. To conclude, there
are
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false
news
available
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and there is no authentication.
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