The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, bit it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with internet and what solutions can you suggest?
In recent years, a lot of
people
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are
used the internet way Verb problem
have
shared
and Wrong verb form
share
purchased
somethings Wrong verb form
purchase
due to
being easier to get. Linking Words
This
tendency would cause some serious issues that had not happened before. Linking Words
This
essay will expound on and supply some possible measures to address them.
To commence, there are two major reasons that lead to Linking Words
cyber
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fraud
on the internet when consumers Use synonyms
shared
and Wrong verb form
share
bought
whatever items. Wrong verb form
buy
To begin
with, Linking Words
for instance
, some experts Linking Words
told
that a horde of Verb problem
said
people
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prolonged
for long hours on work or study, they customed using online platforms to purchase items in order to fulfil their daily basic needs like food, detergents and so on. Verb problem
spend
This
resulted in Linking Words
cyber
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fraud
, Use synonyms
such
as stealing private debate card information when consumers bought something. Linking Words
Moreover
, another problem is many hackers made track of users providing personal news Linking Words
while
sharing as users did not set up the security wall online. Linking Words
Consequently
, Linking Words
this
would cause so critical problems by themselves like losing their money.
Even though some problems are serious, there are some possible solutions that can be taken. Linking Words
First,
the Apple store is a good sample and launches a lot Linking Words
f
products for Change preposition
of
people
to set up their firewalls online Use synonyms
owing
to prevent Verb problem
apply
cyber
Use synonyms
fraud
. Use synonyms
Hence
, it’s obvious that the government should engage technological communities which provide schemes like the Apple store for users purchasing security software. Linking Words
Additionally
, the other possible solution is for public authorities to announce Linking Words
cyber
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fraud
is a danger when Use synonyms
people
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shared
something on social media. Wrong verb form
share
This
could get some messages to residents about the issue.
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To sum up
, following the statement above, if Linking Words
people
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used
the internet way to do some things, they may meet the track or fake events. Wrong verb form
use
However
, the government and public authorities should play the right roles for their citizens, it would be better in the future.Linking Words
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task response
Ensure to address all aspects of the essay prompt in detail. Provide more specific examples and elaborate on the problems associated with internet use and the solutions suggested.
coherence and cohesion
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