More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

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present time,

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drinking sugar-based

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are becoming widespread.

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is a serious issue because

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would lead to health problems.

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essay will consider the main causes of consuming sugar-based

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, before proposing two possible solutions. Perhaps the most important cause of drinking sugar-based

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is it is becoming more affordable ,especially to the masses. With few alternatives, many

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choose to devour

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kind of drink to quench their thirst aside from the less expensive drinking plain water.

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,

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are becoming obese and different health issues are appearing

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as diabetes. Another key factor is the appealing taste of these

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due to the added flavours. The majority of

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are choosing

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to quench their thirst rather than the bland taste of water.

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means that the needed amount of water for the human body is not achieved,

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, athletes would rather drink "Energy

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" because they would feel revitalised and energized without realizing that they feel thirsty even more. Fortunately,

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, there are two promising solutions to

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problem.

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of all, schools and the government could introduce an information campaign.

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would educate the children in schools and the public about the harmful effects of drinking sugar-based

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, schools can include

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information in their Science subjects.

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, the government can impose a value-added tax on these addictive

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, which would increase the prices ,

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, it would become difficult to buy for the public. In conclusion,

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choosing to drink sugar-based

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is a serious problem which is primarily caused by their affordable price, along with their appealing taste. I recommend that the government address

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issue by

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campaigns about its negative effects on health, and imposing of tax to reduce the proportion of the majority that can afford to buy these

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