Some people think the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement give reasons to your answer and include example from your own knowledge and experience

In

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modern era, globalization is increasing day by day which brings tremendous outputs towards the citizens. As we all know, some of them are against

this

modernisation,

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however

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strongly agree with the above

Point

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To begin

with, due to

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new ,

growth

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many new companies are established in different areas. Because of

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employment ratio increased and it benefits everyone.

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, TATA group has recently inaugurated their new firm in Rajkot. Due to

this lower middle-class families

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this lower middle-class family

these lower middle-class families

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from the local got chance to earn by constructing

a new buildings

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new buildings

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and many Middle-class,class young people got

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job

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which helps to increase employment. Stating my

second

point

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technological innovation helps people to make their life easy.

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, mobile phones have so many features and of them is a person did not have to remember anything. It automatically reminds you by setting up a reminder. All and all to conclude my

point

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globalization and the spread of multinational companies helps in increasing the employment ratio and made people's life easier