Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and caused to helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this statement & give your opinion.

Millions of animals have been being killed or

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as people for thousands of years in

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sports

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moral statements had been shifted and

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activity became unacceptable

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and is going to be cancelled. I totally agree with

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paragraphs will observe major reasons for banning bloody competitions

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as social behaviour and health risks.

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with cruelty and violence are popular for

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spectacular actions, but only

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number of watchers think –

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it could impact

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their attitudes. Obviously, these extreme

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are concerned

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, which

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psychology, person integrates into a psychopath who is certain to be a part of

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. It had been historically exemplified in Ancient Greek , where simply adored youngsters from Coliseum started to execute their own bloody games on the streets and it was called

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“Hunger Games”.

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, thousands of deaths or health issues come along with dreadful fights, if blood games will not be closed.

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Medical and

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veterinary

services, which are not able to accept that number of

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and animals, respectively.

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, many

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will be broken and many traumas will be insured, in

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case

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beasts and

sportsman

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sportsmen

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are suffering from

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kind of

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only for laughs from the public.

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, famous fighter Magomed Abdusalamov during his career and one fortunate fight, started to ill by cadastre diseases of

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, and now he is unable to move and

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his own. To conclude, it is

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the better

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trend

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society to exclude blood

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out of

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world, simply there are many alternatives.

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have

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significant

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on each

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of

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life, especially

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psychological and medical.