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some people think that social networking site have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society to what extend do you agree or disagree?

#people #site #impact #individuals #society
The two pie charts
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 how 5 kinds of fossil fuels compared in France in the years 1995 and 2005. Over the whole period given, it is clear that coal retained its
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 position and other fossil fuels were the least significant part of the energy production. Now, turning to the details coal and gas made up 29.80% and 29.63% of France’s energy production respectively, and these figures rose to 30.93% and 30.31% in 2005. Moving on to the remaining charts, nuclear and other fossil fuels were at 6.40% and 4.90% in 1995 respectively and both of them had
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 double increase in 2005.
In contrast
, petro was the only fossil fuel that dropped during the given period.
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