In some countries, there are not enough medical or educational facilities in rural ares. Therefore, some people believe newly graduated teachers and doctors should be sent to work in rural area for sometime. Other people think that people should be free to choose where they work after graduation. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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rapidly. As the human population is expanding every day, and in order to have a good life they need

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expert medical attention. While,

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some light, on how the competition to be ahead in life gets tougher.

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newly graduated adults, a great deal of interest has been shown in fields like health and teaching.

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, the youth graduating nowadays

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with great new ideas, and have the internet to support them during

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tasks. While

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being in the health industry is tedious for many, it's

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equally rewarding for many. I believe, children are able to make

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because of active examples of self-regulated choices.

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, being a nurse or a doctor is seen to be the moral thing to do.

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, it comes with the experience of putting others before yourself, sometimes it is ideally expected.

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, many children go through many years of studying

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schools and colleges to achieve

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quality of life.

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high expectations on children who have already

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through a lot, can be considered

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selfish. In conclusion, while it might seem like a nice thing to do, if the work in villages is not from a volunteer point of view, it should be left as a choice for the candidate to make. In my opinion,

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demands from the youth can be damaging to their

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and put a lot of pressure on their growth.