The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times,

space

exploration projects have had an important role in protecting our

planet

earth

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. The astronaut who walked first on the moon said that it was a golden milestone in human life, the opponents of the former view,

however

, argue that they could not find anything beneficial from

this

as it was an expensive milestone. I disagree with the opponents' view as

space

exploration has many benefits

such

as finding new reasons for prevailing diseases, and understanding environmental

pollution

, and

climate

change

.

Apart from

this

,

space

projects help in finding new planets near our galaxy. There are certain reasons for

space

travel

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the environment from threats and even from

extinction

. The prime reason for

this

is to discover new causes of persistent diseases among people. By

this

I mean,

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space

journeys, astronauts have been exposed to radiation and experienced microgravity in

space

paving the way for some changes in their bodies which are similar to heart disease and age-related problems on our

earth

. Another pertinent reason is that

space

projects help to understand the environmental

pollution

on the

earth

. To explicate

further

, by using satellites and high-power microscopes, scientists could measure the amount of

pollution

like air

pollution

from fossil fuel fumes on our

planet

from

space

.

Apart from

this

point, scientists can watch

climate

change

by observing the

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and

antarctic

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Antarctic

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arena with the assistance of high-power lenses. To cite an example, an Indian satellite found out about recent changes in

earth's

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climate

1 year ago by a keen observation from

space

and sent photographs of crucial environmental data to the

earth

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. As per the photos,

climate

change

is increasing day by day by melting arctic and antarctic ice forms

due to

global warming.

Furthermore

, Another notable need for

space

programs is that, discovering new planets to live on. To elucidate, our home

earth

is unique and there are plenty of chances for the

extinction

of the

earth

through asteroid collision,

climate

change

and pandemic diseases. If we might not find

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solutions for the aforementioned reasons for

extinction

, finding a new

planet

is a good idea to survive.

For instance

, many developed countries have started to find

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new

planet

which is similar to our

planet

earth

in another galaxy. In conclusion, it is stated that

space

exploration programs are pivotal for mankind even though it is expensive to implement. I believe that

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discovering new threats on the

earth

is important to the survival of humans from

extinction

in future.