You recently travelled by train on a long journey and you experienced various problems. Write a letter to the train company’s head office. In your letter, give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction ask about what action will be taken to improve the servic

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
letter in order to complain about the difficulties I have faced on a
train
while
travelling from London to Manchester. I would like to tell you that I was using
this
train
service on 10th January 2023 at 10 am from London
Train
station and my seat number was C6 in cabin number 5. The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is cleanliness . My seat was near to washrooms but it was difficult to
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there owing to the unpleasant smell coming from the washroom. When I went to use the bathroom I saw that
this
area was not cleaned for a long time.
In addition
, some crew members were rude in behaviour.
Instead
of assisting ,passengers they were yelling at customers which was totally unacceptable. I would be grateful if you could take serious steps against these issues.
Firstly
, assign someone who will check the cleaning of the
train
every day.
Moreover
, you should take strict action against members who are not working properly. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Tom Nick
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the greeting and closing are more formal, such as 'Dear Sir/Madam' at the beginning and 'Yours faithfully' at the end of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea and that ideas are logically organized throughout the letter for better coherence and cohesion.
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