Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
argue that Use synonyms
people
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with
highly qualified in a profession should Change preposition
apply
work
in the nation where they were trained, while others believe that they can Use synonyms
be
Change the verb form
work
work
wherever they want. Use synonyms
Although
requiring them can increase the number of experts in a Linking Words
country
, their right to get better job Use synonyms
opportunity
and improve their career belongs to them.
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opportunities
To begin
with, the number of professions Linking Words
such
as doctors and engineers Linking Words
are
imperative for the developing Correct subject-verb agreement
is
country
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, students who have finished their Linking Words
study
in Fix the agreement mistake
studies
the
specific field are required to apply their knowledge and Correct article usage
a
work
to their Use synonyms
country
. Their contribution is needed to help their Use synonyms
country
to boost Use synonyms
the
development and they are Correct article usage
apply
also
expected to be an expert which can educate Linking Words
future
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the future
generation
. Fix the agreement mistake
generations
Therefore
, some government scholarships oblige their awardees to Linking Words
work
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at
their Change preposition
in
country
.
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In contrast
, if Linking Words
some one
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someone
stuck
in Add a missing verb
is stuck
their
the Correct pronoun usage
apply
country
where they studied, it may limit their opportunity to enhance their experience and career development. Working Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
in
other
Correct quantifier usage
another
country
is considered not only Use synonyms
provide
better salaries but Fix the infinitive
to provide
also
Linking Words
offer
better professional experiences. Fix the infinitive
to offer
For instance
, new medical graduates pursue chances to Linking Words
work
in Korea in order to gain Use synonyms
advance
medical knowledge Replace the word
advanced
especially
in plastic surgery.
In conclusion, while asking skilled Add the comma(s)
,especially
people
to Use synonyms
work
in the Use synonyms
country
where they were trained can bring benefits for countries development and maintain talented human source, I believe that it is better to allow Use synonyms
people
to Use synonyms
work
in other countries because they can Use synonyms
fulfill
their desire to study and get Change the spelling
fulfil
Add an article
a better
better prospected
career with high salary.Add a hyphen
better-prospected
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