In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Current development
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businesses
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advertising
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to show that
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businesses always renew their product.
This
could be to make them seem unique and interest more consumers.
Although
there is a benefit of
this
, a drawback is
also
following. Turning to the detail, innovation showed in
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of products meant to
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the items from the others, appeal
consumers
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and presumably rise the success of businesses. Humans have a tendency to be curious
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anything new and may easily
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by something unique.
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, people would be curious more
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an advertisement which
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ice cream with
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one
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no difference.
This
strategy may encourage more people to buy the ice cream
although
it may not exactly
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same in the reality. In regard to the effects, there is a positive and
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negative.
One
of the benefits is that it encourages societies to be more creative. As most individuals have
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performance anxiety, they tend to compete
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other to prove who is the best
one
.
For instance
, if
one
entrepreneur succeeded to make an interesting product promotion, the others
also
attempt to make the better
one
whatever the way is.
Nonetheless
,
this
can cause another tendency, which is a tendency to lie. To accomplish a very hypnotizing advertisement, some exaggeration may be needed which may lead to a scam.
Furthermore
, I decisively it is positive to make a
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promotions
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as genius as possible, with
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high attention to
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and rules of honesty. To sum up, clever promotions
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to attract consumers and may encourage people to be more creative in marketing,
although
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also
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risk to offer a scam. I personally opine that it is good to compete in creativity but still need to not cross the border.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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