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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.(comics,books,radio,TV,film theatre) give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience

#three #media #information #comics #books #radio #tv #film #theatre #reason
They say: “ there is no definition of success or failure, it’s just about if you’re satisfied with the result or not.” I think
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 for me. I’m not
matured
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 enough to know what real failure is, but I know that I have to keep trying my best
,
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 because success has no limit. So I think I may as well
summary
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 my studying results
in
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for
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 the
year
of
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2022. 2022 is the
year
 I graduated
elementary
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from elementary
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school
 and
walking
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 into a new chapter of my life
of
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in
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secondary
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school
. My elementary
school
 profile is filled with
10’s
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, but what makes me happier is the comment that teachers say about my active and responsible class president “career” as I value not only studying results but
also
 experiences. At the beginning of the
year
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 I got a B1 Toefl certificate and I got the IELTS certificate
last
 November. I was really satisfied with my progress throughout the
year
. I
also
 learn Chinese and now I can understand basic conversations (
although
 the alphabet…). As I got
in
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 secondary
school
,
last
 term my profile is still great, and I get to be an English class president. I
also
 discovered some of my talents like dancing, which I thought I was bad at in the past, after taking dance lessons. I actually hated dancing at that time, but now I changed my mind about it as it is a way for me to boost my energy and express myself in my own way when meeting new people. In 2023, I have
my
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goals to speak Chinese fluently, be more active, create my own opportunities, and keep up the good work in my studies. I hope you guys achieve good things in
your
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2022, and have
efficent
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efficient
 plans in 2023. HAPPY NEW
YEAR
!
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