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bank
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essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of
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the advantages.
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,
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the cashless
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payment method is appreciated among the
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, and
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line. If he uses a
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without delay choose can be used different payment method.
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, it could avoid
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counterfeit currency exchanges.
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it’s easy to change
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study. I was changing my
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to yuan while
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me. From
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time I don’t believe exchange
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, we will talk about
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the disadvantages
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using
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cards
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. Some
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didn’t use
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bank
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a bank
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card
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. Because they prefer using cash and
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think
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are easy to
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. If they forget their
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password they can’t withdraw their
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. So, some
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don’t like
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bank
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, I have many times lost my
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I recover
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some
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to have it again. In the end, some
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prefer using
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but others don’t. In my
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people
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cash or
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bank
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a bank
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card
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their own choices.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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