in many countries, not enough students study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effect on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Science

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units are important due to

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their

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useful

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and

neccessary

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necessary

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, lacking

student

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students

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spend time on

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this

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subjects in numerous countries. There are plenty of

noteable

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notable

noticeable

reasons for

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situation and how it has negative impacts on our society. Curriculum,

teachers

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issues

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text books

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textbooks

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do not have interesting contents or real problems,

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the students might not interested in studying

science

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teachers

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are play

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an important part in imparting knowledge to scholars. Because to learn a new section in

science

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time

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required and

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from the

teachers

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is essential,

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, not many

teachers

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can do it.

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learner

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skip

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an important lesson, so they can not have a good point in

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exam which requires that lecture,

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result

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they

fell

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boring

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the student tend to not spend time on

science

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subjects.

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science

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is the

basic

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for lots of modern works,

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lack

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of workforce in

science

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works. People will not have significantly

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in technology, biology, etc,

that

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lead

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to numerous emergency issues

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not be solved.

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humans

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can not improve living

standard

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standards

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or techniques which help

humans

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increase work

effiency

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efficiency

effect

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biology

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improvements,

humans

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with

the

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strange diseases. Another example is that if not enough scholars pay attention

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science

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, people will have less opportunity to optimize products,

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and explore

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universe

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. To sum up, both reasons from

teachers

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and curriculum make only

few

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undergraduates keen on

science

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although

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, these units

still

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meaningful for the

growing

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humans

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, and it is so

terriable

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terrible

for improvement of the society without it.

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in many countries, not enough students study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effect on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Your opinion

The plans show the ground floor of the library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.

Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities while others think that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.