in many countries, not enough students study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effect on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Science
units are important due to
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useful
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and
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necessary
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spend time on
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subjects in numerous countries. There are plenty of
noteable
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notable
noticeable
reasons for
this
situation and how it has negative impacts on our society. Curriculum,
teachers
have main responsible for
this
issues
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issue
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.
First
, if the
text books
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textbooks
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do not have interesting contents or real problems,
therefore
the students might not interested in studying
science
.
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,
the
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teachers
are play
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an important part in imparting knowledge to scholars. Because to learn a new section in
science
,
time
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the time
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required and
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from the
teachers
is essential,
however
, not many
teachers
can do it.
For example
, if
learner
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learners
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skip
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an important lesson, so they can not have a good point in
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exam which requires that lecture,
as a
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they
fell
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feel
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boring
then
the student tend to not spend time on
science
subjects.
Nevertheless
,
science
is the
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basis
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for lots of modern works,
thus
there will be
lack
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a lack
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of workforce in
science
works. People will not have significantly
improve
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in technology, biology, etc,
that
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lead
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to numerous emergency issues
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that can
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not be solved.
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Furthermore
,
humans
can not improve living
standard
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standards
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or techniques which help
humans
increase work
effiency
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efficiency
effect
.
For instance
, if people had not
have
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biology
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improvements,
humans
would not have
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with
the
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strange diseases. Another example is that if not enough scholars pay attention
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science
, people will have less opportunity to optimize products,
explore
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and explore
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universe
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. To sum up, both reasons from
teachers
and curriculum make only
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undergraduates keen on
science
,
although
, these units
still
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are still
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meaningful for the
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of
humans
, and it is so
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terrible
for improvement of the society without it.
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