in many countries, not enough students study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effect on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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situation and how it has negative impacts on our society.
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textbooks
therefore
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learners
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the student tend to not spend time on science
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Furthermore
humans
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humans
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efficiency
effect
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