Write a letter to a friend about an upcoming event in your town. Include What the event is Why they would be interested An invitation to stay with you

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Dear Aybuke, I'm writing to you to invite you to a rock concert. Büyük Ev Ablukada is going to perform in the city hall

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month. I have an extra ticket and I would like to give you as a present. We used to go to concerts when we were kids yet we couldn't do

this

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anymore. I miss our childhood and

this

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is a great opportunity to remind those years. I hope we can go together. Plus,

this

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band includes some incredible decors, solo performances and guest celebrities in their show. I know your celebrity crush Korhan Futacı is in town and maybe he is the guest celebrity. That's why you'd enjoy it if you join my plan.

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, I know you can not go to your house at late night but you will be welcome in my flat. I have a guest room and we can do a pyjama party after all these years. Best wishes, Elif Beyza.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

160 words

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Write a letter to a friend about an upcoming event in your town. Include What the event is Why they would be interested An invitation to stay with you

Structure your letter

SOme people think That parents should teach children how to be good memebers of society. Others believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skils than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applications may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say thw history is one of the most ....

These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers,particularly in secondary schools. What are the reason for this, and how could the problem be solved?