Some people say that zoos should be banned for being cruel towards the animals while others say they should be continued for protecting rare animals. Discuss both your views and give your opinion

Some inhabitants state that keeping wild

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is cruel, but

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others opine that rare

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should be protected in confined areas. Personally, I would like to leave

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in the

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by themselves. It is perfectly sensible to say that wild

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should not be kept in the

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they should reside in the

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or in the open field. Having said that, they should feel free and sense

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nature

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of

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animals

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enjoy

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nature

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mamals

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mammals

and reptiles, let's take lions, they want to roam in the

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and like to hunt in the wild. How about monkeys, it is good for them if there are a lot of trees so that they could jump from one tree to another tree. It is

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convinient

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convenient

for tigers who like to run in the

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. So, it is very cruel to keep all the wild

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zoo

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, it is understandable to say that

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vulnerable and rare

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need to be protected in

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or confined places so that they could feel safe and will not be extinct.

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, baby

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are the risk as other

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carnivorous

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hunt them down. Another example

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is that the white lions and certain birds are getting lost due to deforestation. So, it is better to keep eye on them in

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or confined areas. To conclude, it is absolutely fine to leave wild

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in

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nature

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, it is

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correct to say that some rare and vulnerable

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need to be protected. Personally, I would like to say that all

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of

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, let them be

reptile

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reptiles

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or

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mammal

with vulnerable

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can be left in the

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and leave them as they wish to live in

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nature

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