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The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

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In some
people
's mind gay
marriage
 trend has adverse effects on
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society, but others think that it seems to be a
natrual
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natural
 trend and right for
people
 to have
this
 type of
marriage
. I believe that gay
marriage
 should be legal for some reasons. On one hand, in recent few years,
people
 become
open minded
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 to accept gay
couples
 because of
culture
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 exchanges,
people
 start to get more information from foreign countries that gay
couples
 are allowed to get married and
adapt
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adopt
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 children to build their
family
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families
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. Hundreds and
thunsands
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thousands
 of years ago,
same
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the same
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gaders'
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graders
couples
 were recognised as
psyco
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psycho
 patients;
therefore
,
the
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studies and experts were doing many
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analyse
analysis
 and
researchs
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research
 for proving
people
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 that it is not a disease.
On the other hand
, most
of
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people
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the people
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 believe that it is
wrong
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the wrong
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 decision to let
same
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the same
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 gender get married. Especially for some
religons
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religions
, it is important to keep to natural rules which a
marriage
 should be a man with a woman.
In contrast
, I believe it is a big step for
human
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a human
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being
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beings
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 to accept gay
couples
. It has already shocked
for
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people
 when they figure out their sex, and it is
also
 difficult to find someone to be with. Even though
gay
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the gay
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 couple has been together, they have to deal with the whole
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socialty
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society
. It is
tough
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a tough
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situaition
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situation
. In conclusion, I believe it is a society developed for allowing gay
marriage
 because it helps
people
charish
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cherish
 their happiness and it makes the society becomes
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 because everyone has their
auroity
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adroitly
 to get
marriage
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