Many cities have serious problem of traffic congestion. What are the causes of this and what are some possible solutions

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in the number of cars have several problems in

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urban lives.

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of the most important ones is that

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' navigation systems have gotten crowded. In

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I will write my logical opinion about how can we solve it. Nobody would dispute the fact that overcrowding in traffic has a negative impact on

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's life.

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problems of the cars numbers growing and the crowdedness on the streets of

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is that

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who have a car would stick for a long time on the streets and

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wasting the time of

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brings with itself lots of mental and physical health issues,

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in streets for long hours may have an aggressive reaction to others. Another problem that needs to be considered is air pollution because of the massive amount of CO2 gases which are produced by cars,

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's physical health and can be the cause of lung cancer. A possible

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problem would be that the subway systems developed by the government. Subways are

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method would not respond for small

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,but it can be a useful idea for huge

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immediate practical

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is to build new streetways and expand the old ones,

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creating new bridges and

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tunnel

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can be helpful. To conclude, I hold the view that

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urban life's problems and

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with other sophisticated

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the government should start to solve

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fundamental problem.