Shopping is the favourite pastime for most of the young people. Why do ou think is that? Do you think that they should encouraged to do some other useful activities?

Shopping is one of the

favorite

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pastime

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for any individual these days. According to researchers, the younger generation

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inclined towards buying things than participating in other sports or useful activities. In my opinion, youth should use their free

time

more productively rather

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going to a mall or a shop

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no reason. The reasons

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why they should be encouraged to use their leisure hours in useful ways will be discussed

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essay. Almost everyone around the globe enjoys going to a shop and

buy

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things. One reason, why the current young people love to spend their free schedule on purchasing is to avoid their

lonliness

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loneliness

as most

of

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the

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parents these days are working

indiviuals

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individuals

who fail to spend quality

time

with their families.

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younger

adults

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it was proved that

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frequent shoppers are those who lack attention from their families or friends. So, these young people find their pastime through going to a mall or buying something online mainly to overcome their

lonliness

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loneliness

. Shopping should only be limited to

useful

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purchasing and not for fun or

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leisure activities. These free hours should be used wisely on productive

activties

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activities

that can be helpful for the physical and mental

well being

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of a person.

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, the youth in Singapore were encouraged to utilize their spare

time

in

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creating paintings for an orphanage

with

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a token of appreciation for the best art and

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not only stopped them

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from

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spending their money but

also

reduced their isolated feeling. So,

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encouraging

younger

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generation to utilize their spare hours wisely can help them in getting over their sadness as well as evolve them to make new connections. So in conclusion, all the youth should be cheered to use their leisure

time

in a productive manner.